Shubham Shree’s irreverent Hindi poem Poetry Management has been awarded the 2016 Bharat Bhushan Agrawal Prize by renowned Hindi author Uday Prakash to howls of rage from the Hindi poetic establishment. Daisy Rockwell’s translation of the poem is accompanied by Hindi poet Mangalesh Dabral’s explanation of what’s got the critics fuming.

Poetry Management

By Shubham Shree

Writing poetry is bogus!
Yeah, and useless!
Totally.

Unprofessional profession!
Part time!
Why didn’t I do some MBA-type thing?
It’d be a blast, man!
I’d write a poem; the SENSEX would fall
The poet Mr So-and-So has written a poem against capitalism
The SENSEX has fallen
Chatter on the channel
This is an example of the fall of American imperialism
Will America be able to control poets inspired by Venezuela?
Assurance from the Finance Minister:
Have faith, small-time investors!

The RBI will immediately increase the repo rate
Hubbub in the media
A contemporary poetry collection is coming out:
What do you think, how will the common man, the aam aadmi, deal with this collection?
SMS your response to us
But hey, the glory of the CPO (Chief Poetry Officer) will skyrocket!
Ads will show up for every programme:
Reliance Digital Poetry
makes life poetic
Tata poetry –
Every word just for you
People will hang poetry in their drawing rooms
Ooh, it’s so lovely!
Seems like something by someone from Sahitya Akademi!
No, sir, it’s imported
The original is worth millions of dollars
This one’s a copy
Children will write essays:
When I grow up I want an MPA
LIC Poetry Insurance:
Your dream is ours too
DU, Poetry Honours, cut-off sky-high
The girls have come in first again
In the PAT (Poetry Aptitude Test) exams
Students have burnt the VC in effigy
Protesting PAT reservation cheating
Approval granted for eight new poetry institutes
At only three years of age, three thousand poems memorised:
India’s tiny miracle
America, anxious about the situation in Iran –
Defeated by the Farsi poetic tradition!

This is All India Radio
Now you’ll hear the news in Hindi from Seema Anand
Namaskar!
Today the Prime Minister departs for a three-day International Poetry Conference
All the country’s poetry groups are participating
The Foreign Minister made it clear that India will not change its poetry policy for any price
The India-Pakistan Poetry Negotiations were again unsuccessful
Pakistan demands India retract its claims on Iqbal, Manto and Faiz
China again tested new poetic adornments
Sources say these adornments will now create the most powerful
poetry collections in the world
India’s foremost poetry producer, Mr Wandering Lover – Ashiq Awara – died at dawn today
More attacks on Dalit poets in Utter Pradesh today
In the meantime, in games, for the third time running,
India has won the gold medal in Antakshari
India won the match in straight sets, 6-5, 6-4, 7-2
That’s the news for today!

Today’s Hindu, Hindustan Times, Dainik Jagaran, Prabhat Khabar
The kids are going crazy for the latest poetic hairstyles
Poetesses share their short and long vowel secrets
30-year-old MPA boy –seeks homely, convent-educated, traditional bride
25-year-old MPA girl: fair, slim, tall – seeks suitable groom

Dude, this is fun
Keep talking
I’m gonna be a hero
Handing out autographs everywhere I go
It’s gonna be awesome, dude
Shut up, man
Third Division MA
Who’s gonna pay for an MPA?
Enough of your bullshit!
Sit down and proofread

— Translated from the Hindi by Daisy Rockwell

A note is a note is a note

By Mangalesh Dabral

Twenty-five-year-old Hindi poet Shubham Shree is in the centre of a poetic storm. Her poem “Poetry Management” was selected for a prestigious award established in the name of the late poet Bharat Bhushan Agarwal for 2016 by the well-known poet and short story writer Uday Prakash, one of the jury members.

The selection gave birth to a huge uproar on social media, with a number of people damning the poem because it apparently mocked the business of writing poetry in a world full of careerism, pragmatism and worldly wisdom. The propaganda was so vicious – bordering on vulgarity and misogyny – that some senior poets who are active on Facebook, etc., had to come forward to defend the young poet and poem in question. The entire episode became disgusting, not to mention depressing, for the young poet.

Shubham Shree has been a research scholar at Jawaharlal Nehru University, a renowned institution, much maligned in the recent time by the Bharatiya Janata Party Government in India and many communal ultra-rightist organisations affiliated with it. She has a number of brilliant poems to her credit.

Most of her poems deal with the inner world of the Hindi academia, leftist politics, male chauvinistic behaviours and radical feminist discourse. Much to the chagrin of the bosses in Hindi academic world, she has kept dissecting the reality behind the mask of scholarship at the level of higher education.

Irony, dark humour, questioning and extremely playful language have been her weapons of dissection. With these, she has created a niche for herself in a short time while remaining aloof from the literary hullaballoo.

The uniqueness of her questioning is evident in one of her much-discussed poems, in which she asserts that the cleaning staff in the university refuses to handle the menstrual pads of the girl students unless they are completely covered in newspaper, while nobody has a problem with underclothes full of the stains of male semen. “Rather,” she writes, “there are many hymns in praise of semen.”

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Shubham’s poem Poetry Management deploys some of her favourite weapons. On the face of it, the poem does mock poetry itself and highlights the fruitlessness of the act of writing poetry as it does not serve any worldly purpose. It’s an “unprofessional profession.”

Then the poem proceeds towards a playful fantasy of imagining the importance and might of poetry where everything, from the Sensex to all of world politics is impossibly overshadowed by poetry – which in the end becomes “bullshit”. This makes the poem a hilarious, and absurd, experience.

But this is just the surface of the poem and behind it, we can perceive the intense irony at work. However funny this construct may appear, its bricks and mortar are made of empathy and compassion for poetry. Reading between the lines, it scoffs at the insensitivity of the world around us, which is highly competitive, management–oriented and opportunistic.

It brings to light the futility of managing poetry in the world of business management. We can hear the lamentation of poetry itself beneath the comical façade of the poem. As in many of her other poems, here too Shubham breaks away from the traditional, accepted, “literary” mould of poetry, and tries to create a structure that is “non-literary” and “non-poetic”, and is more prosaic, more functional and theatrical. What we get in the end is an intense critique of our times, where the MBA has become the central concern of the humankind.

Sadly, those who misunderstand Poetry Management have simply shown how business management has clouded our ability to see beneath the surface of language and read between the lines.

The original poem in Hindi

कविता लिखना बोगस काम है!
अरे फालतू है!
एकदम
बेधन्धा का धन्धा!
पार्ट टाइम!
साला कुछ जुगाड़ लगता एमबीए-सैमबीए टाइप
मज्जा आ जाता गुरु!
मने इधर कविता लिखी उधर सेंसेक्स गिरा
कवि ढिमकाना जी ने लिखी पूंजीवाद विरोधी कविता
सेंसेक्स लुढ़का
चैनल पर चर्चा
यह अमेरिकी साम्राज्यवाद के गिरने का नमूना है
क्या अमेरिका कर पाएगा वेनेजुएला से प्रेरित हो रहे कवियों पर काबू?
वित्त मंत्री का बयान
छोटे निवेशक भरोसा रखें!
आरबीआई फटाक रेपो रेट बढ़ा देगी
मीडिया में हलचल
समकालीन कविता पर संग्रह छप रहा है
आपको क्या लगता है, आम आदमी कैसे करेगा सामना इस संग्रह का?
अपने जवाब हमें एसएमएस करे
अबे, सीपीओ (चीफ पोएट्री ऑफिसर) की तो शान पट्टी हो जाएगी!
हर प्रोग्राम में ऐड आएगा
रिलायंस डिजिटल पोएट्री
लाइफ बनाए पोएटिक
टाटा कविता
हर शब्द सिर्फ़ आपके लिए
लोग ड्राईंग रूम में कविता टाँगेंगे
अरे वाह बहुत शानदार है
किसी साहित्य अकादमी वाले की लगती है
नहीं जी, इम्पोर्टेड है
असली तो करोड़ों डॉलर की थी
हमने डुप्लीकेट ले ली
बच्चे निबन्ध लिखेंगे
मैं बड़ी होकर एमपीए करना चाहती हूँ
एलआईसी पोएट्री इंश्योरेंस
आपका सपना हमारा भी है
डीयू पोएट्री ऑनर्स, आसमान पर कटऑफ
पैट (पोएट्री एप्टित्युड टेस्ट) की परीक्षाओं में
फिर लडकियाँ अव्वल
पैट आरक्षण में धांधली के खिलाफ
विद्यार्थियों ने फूँका वीसी का पुतला
देश में आठ ने काव्य संस्थानों पर मुहर
तीन साल की उम्र में तीन हज़ार कविताएँ याद
भारत का नन्हा अजूबा
ईरान के रुख से चिंतित अमेरिका
फ़ारसी कविता की परम्परा से किया परास्त!
ये है ऑल इण्डिया रेडिओ
अब आप सुनें सीमा आनंद से हिंदी में समाचार
नमस्कार!!
आज प्रधानमन्त्री तीन दिवसीय अंतर्राष्ट्रीय काव्य सम्मेलन के लिए रवाना
इसमें देश के सभी कविता गुटों के कवि शामिल हैं
विदेश मंत्री ने स्पष्ट किया है कि भारत किसी भी कीमत पर काव्य नीति नहीं बदलेगा
भारत पाकिस्तान काव्य वार्ता आज फिर विफल हो गई
पाकिस्तान का कहना है कि इक़बाल, मंटो, और फ़ैज़ से भारत अपना दावा वापस ले
चीन ने आज फिर ने काव्यलंकारों का परीक्षण किया
सूत्रों का कहना है कि यह अलंकार फ़िलहाल दुनिया के सबसे शक्तिशाली
काव्य संकलन पैदा करेंगे
भारत के प्रमुख काव्य निर्माता आशिक़ आवारा जी का आज तड़के निधन हो गया
उत्तरप्रदेश में आज फिर दलित कवियों पर हमला
उधर खेलों में भरत में लगातार तीसरी बार
कविता अंत्याक्षरी का स्वर्ण पदक जीत लिया है
भारत ने सीधे सेटों में ६-५, ६-४, ७-२ से यह मैच जीता
समाचार समाप्त हुए!
आ गया आज का हिंदू, हिंदुस्तान टाइम्स, दैनिक जागरण, प्रभात ख़बर
युवाओं पर चढ़ा पोएट हेयर स्टाइल का बुख़ार
कवयित्रियों से सीखें ह्रस्व दीर्घ के राज़
३० वर्षीय एमपीए युवक के लिए घरेलू, कान्वेंट एजुकेटेड, संस्कारी वधू चाहिए
२५ वर्षीय एमपीए गोरी, स्लिम, लम्बी कन्या के लिए योग्य वर सम्पर्क करें
गुरु मज़ा आ रहा है
सुनाते रहो
अपन तो हीरो हो जाएँगे
जहाँ निकलेंगे वहीं ऑटोग्राफ़
जुल्म हो जाएगा गुरु
चुप बे
थर्ड डिविज़न एम ए
एमपीए की फ़ीस कौन देगा?
प्रूफ़ कर बैठ के
ख़ाली पीली बकवास करता है!

Translations of other works by Shubham Shree here.

Daisy Rockwell would like to thank Hindi poet Asad Zaidi, editor of Three Essays Collective, for introducing her to Shubham Shree’s work and to Aftab Ahmad for invaluable translation assistance.

This article was originally published here.